Nyanyian Jiwa

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by aryo83, May 8, 2013.

  1. aryo83

    aryo83 New Member

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    Ingin ku raih bintang di luasnya angkasa rayaIngin ku bermain di hamparan pelangi jinggaIngin ku berteduh di sejuknya taman puspaIngin ku berbaring Bermandikan cahaya purnama Telah lama ku bergelut dalam kehampaanTelah lama ku berkubang dalam kekeringanKini ku inginkan warna yang berbedaWarna yang buatku lebih berhargaDi sini...Di tempat ini....Ku tanamkan dalam relung jiwaUntuk hidup yang lebih bermakna
     
  2. samuel

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    Penyair bersosial.com nih ,

    Penyair bersosial.com nih , keren *bagus*
     
  3. Dan

    Dan Forum Bot

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    Mantap tapi lain kali

    Mantap *bagus* tapi lain kali jangan pakai huruf besar semua, kayak spam padahal tidak.
     
  4. ayahnyanadia

    ayahnyanadia Well-Known Member

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    Hanya yg lagi galau yg bisa

    Hanya yg lagi galau yg bisa berpuitis kata.. *jail*
     
  5. aryo83

    aryo83 New Member

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    makasih atas kritik dan

    makasih atas kritik dan sarannya mas dan
     
  6. wphoet

    wphoet You'll Never Walk Alone

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    pujangganya bersosial nih

    pujangganya bersosial nih *bagus*
    @Dan : kyknya bersosial perlu tambahin subforum kyk puisi, atau cerpen, atau joke (cerita lucu) gitu *peace*
     
  7. Dan

    Dan Forum Bot

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    Ya sudah saya buatkan 4 sub

    Ya sudah saya buatkan 4 sub forum baru, Poetry, Tales, Jokes dan Cartoon.
     
  8. sakaji

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    Dan wrote:

    Penambahan ini yang saya tunggu-tunggu. *jail*
     
  9. wphoet

    wphoet You'll Never Walk Alone

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    Dan wrote:

    *bagus* jdi kl mau ketawa2 sendiri skrg sdh ada tempatnya *ketawa4*
     
  10. ncang

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    wphoet wrote:

    ternyata suka ketawa2 disini yah *jail*
     
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    Manteb nih kata-katanya

    Manteb nih kata-katanya menginspirasikan dalam dunia Imajinasi *jail*
     

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