Jalan ini..... (menghibur diri dtengah malam : bikin puisi)

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  1. Adhum

    Adhum Member

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    Jalan ini terasa panjang, hitam berdebu
    Jalan ini berliku, habiskan peluhku
    Jalan ini gersang, tak nampak bayangku
    Jalan ini, jalan ini.....

    Aku tak mengerti...
    Aku lelah, aku mengalah,
    Tak pernah sampai langkahku...

    Kamukah di ujung jalan itu?







    wahahahahhahahah *ketawa1* ...... lagi eror, lgi stres, malem2 gini bkin puisi....
    hhhmm kyaknya sy sdh bisa menyaingi agan @aryo83 nh *merokok2*
     
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    ayahnyanadia Well-Known Member

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    terkadang error, itu normal.

    terkadang error, itu normal.
     
  3. Adhum

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    ayahnyanadia wrote:

    hahahahhaa... error sama normal beda tipis ya
     
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    Kalau gersang minta request

    Kalau gersang minta request sama pemerintah biar di Aspal Korea gan tar kan jadi alus *jail*
     
  5. Adhum

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    AhmadWafa wrote:

    *ketawa4* itu dy masalahnya, aspalnya gk datang2....
     
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