Redup Purnama,Mentari Elok

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  1. miftahul afifah

    miftahul afifah Member

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    hiruk pikuk menyayat gundah teriris perih
    kalut setinggi menara sang pencakar langit runtuh
    terjebak dalam obsesi cerita nestapa
    luangkan jejak mati suri yang enggan
    pergi lebih indah untuk tak melihat bertemu
    serupa pujian puji terkatung mengalun mendayu
    kuterpaksa lumpuhkan segala dusta tentang akan dirimu
    coba relakan sang purnama meredup,redup tanpa cahya
    sing-singkan pajak nurani menggulung tak bermentari
    terlepasku terbebas darimu yang tak memintaku ada
    lekas pergi tinggalkan diri untuk menjauhi temaram elok mentari
     
    miftahul afifah, Oct 2, 2014
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    Musa M Member

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    wah aden ini jago bikin puisi *wow2*
     
    Musa M, Oct 3, 2014
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  3. fairadisain

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    senang sekali berpuisi ya?
     
    fairadisain, Oct 3, 2014
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  4. Yusuf.S

    Yusuf.S Well-Known Member

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    Sepertinya @miftahul afifah ini selalu membuat puisi sebagai bahan threadnya :D
     
    Yusuf.S, Oct 3, 2014
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    weleh,, puisinya bagus,, gak habis-habis dibaca . . . :)
     
    aneukmit, Oct 3, 2014
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    wah bisa ajarin ane dong gan buat puisi ?
     
    Mulia Rifai, Oct 3, 2014
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    lumayan puyeung.. puisinya kurang gregettttt...
     
    bioterra garut, Oct 3, 2014
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  8. miftahul afifah

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    hemm bisa juga
     
    miftahul afifah, Oct 4, 2014
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    he
    iyaa nanti di sempurnakan lg
     
    miftahul afifah, Oct 4, 2014
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  10. miftahul afifah

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    makasih
     
    miftahul afifah, Oct 4, 2014
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    ajarin saya buat puisi dong... :D gelar tiker dulu
     
    debays, Oct 5, 2014
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  12. miftahul afifah

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    hehehehhehe iyaa kak bisa aja heheheh
     
    miftahul afifah, Oct 7, 2014
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  13. miftahul afifah

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    hehehhe begitu ya kak?
     
    miftahul afifah, Oct 7, 2014
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